"...from a more dream-heavy land, A more dream-heavy hour than this."
Nice... loved the way you captured the action of the candle being lighted. And the last lines throw add depth to the poem- giving it's imagery a deeper resonance. Me like!
Come on, this was slightly terrible, no false modesty.Put it down under "midnight madness"
loved the last lines.
oh wow...me being the one with a life-long 'light' obsession...i loved this :)
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Nice... loved the way you captured the action of the candle being lighted. And the last lines throw add depth to the poem- giving it's imagery a deeper resonance.
Me like!
Come on, this was slightly terrible, no false modesty.
Put it down under "midnight madness"
loved the last lines.
oh wow...me being the one with a life-long 'light' obsession...i loved this :)
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